THE BARRIER – MY VEIL – PART 6 –


Am really very disappointed with the drastic drop in ;likes??? what is the issue guysAngry.. i believe the exams are over too ??? still y this CryCryCry??? ve seen so many of my ex readers no longer commenting on my threads, well ive never cribbed about this, but today felt like saying soCryCryCry… I hope ppl give me back honest reviews on this..
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PART 6 :

 

 

 

 

 She was sleeping peacefully when Pinky entered her Room to shuffle her out of her sleep, she yawned and turned back imagining Pinky in her bed but no in reality she wasROFL , Geet Geet utho… Get up…. A dull Saturday morning she was sleeping peacefully only to be disturbed by Pinky, she looked through her blanket and then giving up got up. Pinky was like Geet listen we have to go to Maan Sir’s engagement today, the Mahurat is at 1 so get up and get ready. Geet gave her a deathly stare and then rushed off to get ready, it was 2 hrs finally when the duo got ready.LOLLOLLOL

 

 

 

                  After having brunch Geet though unwillingly accompanied Pinky, She wore a light blue saree and put on her veil and they then set off in her scooty, Pinky was giving her directions and as they drove to KM , Geet felt uneasy driving on a desserted road, she then glanced her rear view to her astonishmentAngry, there were 4 bikes who were following them, she got scared and started to speed up, and finaly took a turn and joined the main roads to get rid of them but those guys didn’t seem to buzz off ,they were dodging her, finally the bikes were so close and on the verge of an accident that she just applied breaks and the vehicle skid and dashed a Mercedes coming in the opposite direction!Wink

 

THUD THUD THUD! !!!

 

 

 

 

                 Geet and Pinky were thrown off guard and before they came to their senses, they heard The Ambulance Siren and someone was shifted to stretcher’s. Pinky n Geet gained momentum and after the scratches the Vehicle had got and initial round of interrogations by traffic police they were set freeCry, the gang of guys who tried to frame Geet were held responsible for the accident and taken up for further interrogationsWink. Slowly they finally drove to KM.

 

 

 

                     KM was dressed like a brideWink, there was not a single piece of wall visible, all decorated and lights shone from all possible directonsWink, Geet had never seen such a majestic view in her lifetimeClap, the fountains at the entrance was so serene and some kids were playing in the garden sideLOL, there was lot of hustle bustle,. The servants all dressed up in uniforms and moved in flocks catering to the guests, the interior of the house was as majestic as the exterioThumbs Upr, the Engagement Podium was set , and a table reserved for the MediaCool, tables were lined up for the guests and people kept flooding in, after the initial invitiries would go get seated awaiting for the engagement, Maan had never approved for this lavish expenditure but Kunal Khurana how could he let his Son Maan Singh Khurana not fashion an idealized Engagement cum Wedding. Geet Pinky caught sight of few fellow other teachers from DPS and started their talks, suddenly when a waitress spilled the contents of his carry over plates over Geet Angry, she just gave a weak smile, and Beena came over to help, she guided Geet to a room upstairs to freshen up, it was then that Kunal saw Beena enter a room and followed her to the room closing the doors.Wink

 

 

 

 

 

              Beena turned out to leave when she heard the door click close , she panicked but to her relief it was none other than KunalLOL. She playfully smacked up, but from the looks of his face anyone can tell he was as pale as a cadaver and his face spoke as if he had seen some ghostAngry, startled Beena asked what had happened. Kunal’s eyes shed tears and this worsend Beena’s condition, she took his hands and pledged him to spill out what ever he was concealing, finally heart broken he told ,Cry

 

“Muskaan has met with an accident and is hospitalized, she is unconscious and …..Dead

 

 

He couldn’t speak further, Beena had literally a heart attack with these words, but someone behind another door started shedding tears, Geet thought of the accident they had witnessed almost an hour agoShocked, could that fateful person be Muskaan, Maan Sir’s fiance?? Her heart shuddered and she slowly crept out of the restroom,Shocked

 

 

Kunal continued ” Mohinder called up, The Drs say its nothing serious, just that she lost some extra blood and would need Blood transfusion for the lossAngry, and they need to keep her in ICU for monitoring so that they can conclude the Head Injury she had was harmless, Mohinder and Rano too have got minor injuries, but right now they are on the way to KM to announce the cancellation of the EngagementCry. Beena’s heart sank further, she spoke muffled words ” Maan “CryCryCry

 

Kunal spoke  ” No No, I haven’t spoken to Maan yet, let Rano n Mohinder come we will all talk and then tell Maan, but Beena we cant cancel this engagementAngry , the Media is here , all High Profile peopleAngry, we just cant cancel the engagement OuchOuchOuch, and give every single person  a chance to mock at our situation, and to top it all, if we cancel this engagement today , Dadima would never approve for Maan marrying MuskaanDeadDeadDead, you know na how much she was against this relation after the Kundali fiasco and all, she would look upon Muskaan as a bad omen and would give red sign for Maan n Muskaan, my heart bleeds for Maan, his tears made wayCryCry. The sudden silence in the romm was broken by Mohinder’s call,

 

K : Hi…. Where are you Mohinder ?Confused

 

M : Downstairs of KM , Lets meet in private..Ouch

 

K ; Ok Mohinder , come up to the first floor third Room, me and Beena are waiting for you, is Rano there?Dead

 

M : Yes She is with me, ok see you in couple of minutes, saying so they sailed upwards to decide the outcome of the day.Confused

 

Unknown to them was a pair of eyes, witnessing the entire conversation, who had died a thousand deaths to see the many revelations, first the accident victims’ identity, then the outcome of the Day and then aparents helplessness and to top it all her guilt , she was crying ferventlyCryCryCry, holding her Nikhaab tight, she wished the Earth swallow her then and there and engulf her miseries and free her of the guilt,.CryCryCry

 

PRECAP :

 

 

 

The Engagement …ShockedShockedShocked

 
 
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JAB WE MET – PART 28 : FAMILY REUNION –


Am really very disappointed with the drastic drop in ;likes??? what is the issue guysAngry.. i believe the exams are over too ??? still y this CryCryCry??? ve seen so many of my ex readers no longer commenting on my threads, well ive never cribbed about this, but today felt like saying soCryCryCry… I hope ppl give me back honest reviews on this..
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PART 28 :

 

FAMILY REUNION

 

 

                Maahi’s wailing had reached a new height, Maan was wondering if she keeps shoutng at this range, she might awaken the other Bears tooAngry, clenching his teeth, he closed his eyes, glanced up a short prayer, a first in his lifetimeShocked, and wishing from heavens that Either Maahi or the Bear don’t move he finally focused and without delay left the trigger button, the sound cracked up and before he could asses he saw her lying flat over the Bear. Still, not moving, His Heart panicked and he took gentle steps forward.LOL

 

 

 

 

                To his utter disappointment , Maahi breahing was hitched and laborious, the girl was under shockOuch, he tried to soothe her to bring her to sense, but she was sweating profusely, the drastic scene had taken a toll over her he presumed, she lay in a pool of blood, the Bear’s bloodAngry, Maan’ hadn’t missed ths shot, but the impact of the shot was seen in Maahi. The girl had to her utter anguish seen the Blood drain out of a hole punctured , the smell of fresh bllod and sight had taken atoll over her and she had collapsed, to prevent further alertness to the other bunch of Bears, Maan carried her off, he tried to sprinkle water but o no avail, he carried her to his Jeep , put her on front seat, tied seat belts nad started to drive making few calls.Dead

 

 

 

 

 

                 The first call was made to the Forest Manager, the private nos on his alerted him, nad Maan spoke to the Officer after initial introductions, the Officer had taken up the responsibility to inform the school authorites and told will call him back once he passes o nthe newsOuch, Next Maan dialed the LifeLine Hospital, the call was directed to the MD and he briefed him about the situation, the Dr had told maan to note down the chil’s pulse once every 15 mi nnad let him know if there is any drop below 60, maan now started the mission of noting her pulse once every 10 min and to his relief nothing much dropped, there were dips and ups but everything was well within the range of 60-90 the way the DR had toldOuch, next he was put on call from the Forest authorities like after half hour when he was driving finally back on the City, The officer had informed the Teachers on excursion and they had put he call with the Child’s mother, Now Maan was on call with Geet, she had panicked when the Teacher’s had called up to inform her about Maahi missing nad then she being fainted , Geet was trembling over the Call, Maan could sense the nervousness in the Lady , and tried to maintain calm state as he spoke,LOL

 

“Madam , I hope there is nothing to worry about , Maahi had just fainted when she saw me shoot Bears, nothing much”Wink

 

 Geet who was a lost case now turned into a tigress ,

 

“How dare on Earth Mr you shoot in front of a 3 year old KidAngry, have you no senses, Do you know the outcome of this, such a mental trauma you’ve put my daughter intoAngry, do you even fathom the psychological outcome of the incident from a child’s point of view Angry? Rich Men’s spoiled brat ROFL“, her cursing session was on full swing when he finally losing his patience interrupted ,

 

“Madam, your Darling daughter was on the lap of the Bear I shotLOL, if I hadn’t shot the Bear, he must have probably eaten her “Angry

 

 

Her jaw fell , Maahi with Bears? Oh Gawd, what happen…

 

 

“You mean to say you shot the Bear , on whose lap Maahi was seated Dead??? You sonovabitchROFL, how dare you, had you missed the shotAngry ,she was trembling with fear at the mere thought of the shot and what if it had missed.  Ignoring her he said he is driving to LifeLine Hospital, and told her too come over there and then disconnected the call, he definitely didn’t want to talk further with the MadWomen.ROFL

 

 

 

 

            Maahi was admitted and immediate infusions were started immediately , Maan went over and was waiting , when her sight provoked him to infinity, Geet, his anger shooted rocket skyWink, how dare she loiter in Hospital at Office hours, she seemed to animatedly talking over phone, and it is when she disconnected the call, she came face to the Man whom she had been cursing for the huge monotonous task that was laid this morninig to her, her Sadoo Boss MSKEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed, She gave him a disgusted look and before anything could happen, he shot his deathly eyes and asked her

 

“Geet what the hell are you doing here in Office hoursAngryAngryAngry ?? ” you are gonna have LOP for today(Loss Of Pay)” If murder was acceptable in the society she wanted to commit one today!DeadDeadDead

 

PRECAP : U tell me guys,. Do you want Maan to know Maahi is Geet’s daughter or let him think Geet is single ???

 

 

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LVE – PART 41 –


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PART 41 :

 

 

 

 

 

            She couldn’t fathom her joy, her joy knew no bounds, she had topped the North Boards, what else she wantedLOL.. She was jumping with joy , when he placed a gift on her hand, literally this was the First gift he had given herWink, atleast the first time he officially gave it to her personally, before she could tear it open, she asked him his result, he smiled sleepishly, Geet ve not flunked in any subject Tongue, so you lose the Bet to Anni and got 85 percent Wink, she was more than happy and hurriedly opened her gift and tears wetter her cheeks when she saw her gift , it was entitled Oxford Pocket Medical DictionaryShocked, he came over her and spoke in her ears, for future Dr.Geet, your first Medical Dictionary and she completed the sentence by someone specialEmbarrassed and winked at himWink and ran away to flaunt her gift in front of everyone.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

            The day was so blessed all of them were happy at the results, and since Maan’s classes too were starting the Khurana’s had to leave to HP, Dev had been shifted to IIT, Delhi and was happily settled with his studies, Geet looked upon him as her Mentor and Guide. The next day Maan was traveling back to HP, in the morning he sneaked in to her room and pulled her to the lawnOuch, she was so sleepySleepy, he made her sit and tried asking her something, he was like Geet don’t you want to talk to meAngry, I thought befor I would go , you would tell me somethingLOL, bolo Geet , kuch tho BoloBlushing. She lowered her gaze, she knew she was trapped, she had to answer him, it was like now or neverAngry,. She didn’t want to upset him fearing how he will take the rejection, but well she didn’t want o accept it too, thinking she had accepted now finally thinking about his health groundsShocked, she tried to beat around the bush, and saoid Maan we are just kids, we have time for all this later in life, right now we need to study firstClap , she turned the tables on her side, don’t you want to grow up as a top Businessman and help Kunla Papa? HE pouted at her question and said NoLOL‘ I dotn want to join Khurana’s , she did nt expect this from him, he went on to say I will bring up our own company, Geean ImpexROFL! Geet n Maan ka industry, she was floored by his revelation well the guy never seemed to disappoint him. Well who knew that in Future Maan would fulfil his promiseClap but only that his shona would not be able to see itAngry. Fate is the most cruel of all things that can happen on Earth!Cry

 

 

 

 

 

         As the car was being loaded she couldn’t stand there, all the memories flashed in front of her face, she kissed Anni with tears dropping down her cheeks, he wasseated in the passenger seat watching her andwaitng her to speak up somethingOuch, she just ran away to her room, after the elders bid farewell, the car drove off, Maan kept his gaze to the window of her room but to his disappointment he couldn’t catch a final glimpse of herCry. She on the other side waspeeking out from the terrace at the other end at seeing him watch her roomWacko, a small smile crept her lips inspite of the crying, she didn’t know how long she had been lookingat the long disappeared car till her mob buzzed with a msg, she opened it to read , Open your FridgeROFL. She ran downstatirs bumping down few stairs and dashed to the kitchen, the moment she opened ,the Freezer box was fully loaded with chocolates, Damm it this guy was mad insane, she cursed him and started licking the chocolates till Pari came over for her share, unwillingly Geet gave Pari some share of her goodies, hse did nt want to share anything that connected her and Maan, but Parri and her never ending Fuss., she had to give in.Confused

She went over to her room for a nap, when a notepad caught he r attention, she hurriedly went over to read ,Wink

 

Waiting for that fateful day,
when I can hold your hand and say,
my one and only love is you,
I know this love of ours is true,
to this one person you mean the world,
You make my stomach do twists and twirls,
I’ll always have a love for you,
no matter the situation going through,
no matter good or bad, nor right or wrong,
my love for you will always stay strong.
You mean so much to this one man,
I want to give you all I can,
I hope one day you feel this way,
for I am yours and here to stay.

 

 

 

 

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LVE – PART 40 –


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PART 40 :

 

 

 

                   As he walked pastthe Main Hall, He saw Beena mom n Rano mom were talking endlessly, Anni was cuddled on Rano’s Lap and dev was playing some videogamesLOL. It was 1 o clock and the House was so fresh like daytime. He slowly sneaked out, telling he wanted a walk in the Garden. He went down and woke up the Driver andthey drove on the Roads of Delhi for an Ice Cream shop, Finally after half Hour they drove back home, Maan rang the Bell and Geet came over Running, she openedthe Door and was shoked to see him standing with Ice Creams ShockedShockedShocked, she blushed tight and put her heads sownEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed, she didn’t know what to speak. Rano mom came up to see and was startled , Before she could enquire further he thrust the ice creams to her saying Mom am feeling hungry serve me na, Me n kaka were driving and we found the shop and got some for all of us, Rano smiled and served all , Geet was a silent specatator to this entire scene, Anni too got up and all had the Ice creams , Geet ate many servings thanks To Maan who kept on filling her cups everytime it reached a low levelLOLLOLLOL. The smile on her face was everything that meatn for him. It waslike fate had entitledthem each other as caretaker, that one  would do anything go to any heights to pamper the other but be it far be it near, they never stopped thinking about the other or caring about the other, but how long will this continue, what fate didn’t know was how much ever it plays with them, it cant tear apart their hearts which beats for the other. Fate can succed in debonding them but it can never succedd in separating their entwined souls.Heart

 

 

 

 

 

                     Finally the day had comefor the Boards Results, MaanEet were anxcious to the power of inifinity. Geet couldn’t sleep full night ,and Maan was restless seeing his Shona like this, Morning after Bfast, he walked to her Room and palyed the Music Player…Embarrassed

 

 

Tumhein Pata To Hoga
Tum Hi Pe Main Fida Hoon
Tumhein Hai Jab Se Chaha
Hawaon Mein Udta Hoon
Tum Hi Mere har Pal Mein
Tum Aaj Mein Tum Kal Mein

 

                  She was having shower when she heard the Music Player, she was blushing tightEmbarrassed she knew it was him inside, why had he to ocme in everytime hse was on shower, she dreaded thinking of going out with her bathrobe!Angry

 

 

 

 

Hey Shona Hey Shona
Hey Shona Hey Shona

 

 

 

 

 

Tumhein Pata To Hoga
Ke Mere Dil Mein Kya Hai
Chalo Kahe Deti Hoon
Kabhi Nahin Jo Kaha Hai
Tum Hi Mere Har Pal Mein
Tum Aaj Mein Tum Kal Mein

 

                     She dressed up as decent as possible , trying to cover up as much as her robe did still with a hesistancy feeling she came out . She knew he was just tryiong to calm her mind which was evr tensed, but damm it he didn’t know he was arising some new sensations in her.EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

 

 

Hey Shona Hey Shona
Hey Shona Hey Shona

 

 

 

Tum Jo Gussa Bhi Karo
To Mujhe Pyaar Lagta Hai, Jaane Kyun
Main To Jo Bhi Kahoon
Tumhein Ikraar Lagta Hai, Jaane Kyun
Chhodo Bhi Yeh Ada
Paas Aake Zara
Baat Dil Ki Koi, Keh Do Na

 

                  She stepped out  wit hwater dripping from her long straight hairs, Oh Gawd how much he loved her , he needed to confess before he loses his sanityEmbarrassed , how many times will he confess , will she not accept his love Angry??? HE felt sad, and the sudden change in his eyes alarmed her. She tried to be calm, and spke her voice cracking Maa n can you step out I need to change, he left the I Pod there and wlaked out blushing.LOLLOLLOL

 

 

Hey Shona Hey Shona
Hey Shona Hey Shona

 

Saari Duniya Ko Chhod Ke Maine Chaaha Hai, Ik Tumhein
Maine Zindagi Se Maanga Hai To Sirf Maanga Hai, Ik Tumhein
Ab Isi Chah Mein
Ab Isi Raah Mein
Zindagi Bhar Mere, Tum Ho Na

 

 

 

                   Well the song played and he stood on her door, evryword was what his heart felt and what his heart wanted to convey herEmbarrassed, wil she accept those feelings, he was scarded , scared of her rejectionCry. He knew his Shona can never reject him but Por Maan didn’t know what future had for them. He had chosen her above allHeart, above all relations and above all feelingsHeart, even before he knew thw meaning of Love he had loved her, he was madly in love with her and that was the universal truth. He just wanted her in evry day evry night of his lifeEmbarrassed, to see her to smake her smile was all that mattered to himLOL. He knoceked after lapse of minutes, and she opened the Door, he went in straight her …and Hugged her tight.Hug Congrats ShonaHeart… U topped the Delhi North board in the Boards, Tears were floeing down his chees, she was awestruck to see him in that stateEmbarrassed. Oh Man he loved her so much , why she had to deny him the love which was his birthrightAngry. She made up her minds, a few more Hide n Seek and then she will acknowledge himROFL.

         

 

Hey Shona Hey Shona
Hey Shona Hey Shona

 

 

 

Tumhein Pata To Hoga
Tumhi Pe Main Fida Hoon
Tumhein Hai Jab Se Chaha
Hawaon Mein Udta Hoon
Tumhi Mere Har Pal Mein
Tum Aaj Mein Tum Kal Mein
Hey Shona Hey Shona
Hey Shona Hey Shona
Hey Shona Hey Shona
Shona Hey Shona
Hey Hey Shona Hey Shona

 

 

 

PRECAP : Confessionss!!! Wink

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DARK HIDDEN SECRETS – PART 20 + EPILOGUE –


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PART 20 :

 

                 She stared back at him and then narrated the entire incident from the attacks to how finally they got the autopsy done and how the reports shocked them and how they went over to Peter’s house late nightAngry, and also confessed how shocked she was finding maan there, finally they had concluded that , irritated with the patient Maan had finally used his Long researched drug on PatriciaAngry , which killed her , it aw as a fast poison and killed her within hours, she was sobbing while she narrated the whole storyCryCryCry, Maan was shocked he didn’t know how to respond, he didn’t know how much she has misunderstood but guessing the position she was in anyone would have guessed the same, they arrived at a their stop and took a cab and she drove to the resort all silence, he didn’t know what to tell her.OuchOuchOuch

 

                After minutes of silence he spoke, if u think a m a Murdered why did u kidnap me GeetWink, why are you taking me far from the realityAngry, far from the court and its judgement ??? Why cant you let the Court act upon meOuch,. She immediately applied the breaks and hugged him, kissing every inch of his faceBlushing, and licking them, cos I love you MaanHeart, I love you since the day my eyes saw youHeart, I love you like foreverHeart, for eternityHeart, thought the results prove you are a murders my heart beats for you, and this heart knows no betrayal,Heart, this heart tells me that let alone Negligence you cant do one wrong thing in lifeHeart and this Murder stuff is completely impossible keeping u in pictureHeart. He was awed at her confession and at her, he sealed this moment by sealing her lipsDay Dreaming, the kiss was soft at first , she was not giving in, he licked her lower lipDay Dreaming, and then gained entry, he kissed passionately, she was loosing herself she hold him tight ,lest she shudder he sensed her passion and let go off immediatelyEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed, he needed to confess know, he needed to break his Hippocratic Oath to prove her trust on him and then as she drove he spoke.Wink

 

 

 

             “Geet since you know the half story you investigated I think you deserve the every right to know the other half too, uou knew about my cancer drug, it was during one of my trips in hunting with Peter that we found a snake, a new speciesAngry , Peter was interested in dissecting it and I helped him, you know Peter is damm adventurous and while dissecting we found some strange toxins, I took them back to my lab for research and after few weeks stumbled upon the anti cancer drug, this tablet would have phenomenol effects, the only thing was it could not be given generalized but locally to the cancer cellsShocked, if it was given to all the cells , then the patient would collapse, after y invention I had discussed the issue with Peter and Patricia, Peter was very helpful in getting me more snake venom for my research but one day Patricia came to me with a request.”Angry

 

         The car finally stopped and they entered the resort. They walked and settled on the couch in the drawing room, after placing lunch orders, He continued, ” She was fed up living with all her ailments , she was fed up with life and pleaded me to poison her ,. To end her sufferings Dead, I rejected outright , but she was persistent, evrytime she would plead endlessly, and then finally we decided we would move the case to the court in request of Mercy KillingAngry, I used to carry my drug everywhere in fear of losing it or someone using my invention, the day I made House call tat day too I carried my kit, and I think that day Patricia changed the bottles Cry, and unknowingly instead of injecting her medicines I had injected the poison, it started working in hours and by evening when I saw her she was sinking, when everyone told about heart attack I couldn’t believe cos I being her Dr know everything, and yday during Trial when Jasmine told , that Patricia was not responding o Glucose I  summed it up, the drug I had invented acts against glucose bringing down body sugar levels and ultimately depriving energy and killingOuch, to confirm this I went to meet Peter late night nad spiekd his drinks but instead I think I drank the spiked drinks. And then the rest you knwOuch, But what I still cant understand is the attacks on Pinky and you, and then the fights with Nadal, that part is confusing me. Geet chuckled and told, that she did a background research when she found out that maan must have killed PatriciaAngry, when they had seen Nada’s history it was clear he had never won nay Medical trial, his boss would fire him off if he lost this case, so to avoid messing up things, Nadal had hired ppl to see that Autopsy was never doneAngry! Maaneet chuckled and cudled to each other. He kissed her once again Embarrassedand slowly unbuttoned her shirtLOL , she gave in completely and they made love to each other first time under the witness of broad daylight…

 

 

 

 

EPILOGUE : 6 MONTHS LATER!

 

            A 6 month pregnant Geet was glued to the Television , Tears dripping from her eyes, Maan walked the Podium to receive Annuall Prize for Medical Research for his breakthrough research on Cancer CurenessClap. He acknowledged Peter for his support in getting him access to the snake venom, and Geet for standing through al lthe thick phase of his lifeEmbarrassed, he joked on to narrate his Medical Negligence Trial, how he ran away wit his sweetheart before the verdict was announced and how their love finally being confessed and later how they had submitted themselves to State Police and confessed the whole truthLOL, how it took another 1 month for the Court to look upon the case and how Maan was left without any case on himself. His speech reminded her of how Fred had stood by them during the 1 month how supportive he had been, and heart broken though but he moved on to let the two love birds live their fairy tale life!Blushing

 

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 Thank You Guys, for all the immense support and love you showered on this FFHug! but am not the only person who should take the credits for, this story is inspired from a novel I read back many yearsCry, Robin Cook’s CRISIS! When I finished the book, I hated it for the bad endingDead, Being a Dr myself, I couldn’t accept it the Dr was indeed a Murderer it shook me so much and if given a chance I wanted to reframe the endEmbarrassed, I adapted the story according to my wishes! I took the theme ana have modified and given my version of Medical NegligenceEmbarrassed and Ended the story with a positive noteLOL. The story was not based on a couple but the helping forensic expert also was  guy, and the Dr accused also a guAngryy, I changed the characters to fit MaanEet into it, the main plot was same but the story is different and the scenes are different and adapted as per the situation and the end is very very very far from what Cook had writtenCryCryCry! I really feel light now that I finished this bad ending with a happy endingEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed! And thanks to you all for patiently reading this story and would suggest you read Crisis too incase you are prepared for a bad endingDeadDeadDead! Robin Cook is one of my fav authors, he writes medical mysteries and ve read all his 40 novels during my school and initial college days. I suggest you ppl to try it in case you love reading suspense and mystery stories!LOLLOLLOL

 

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DARK HIDDEN SECRETS – PART 19 –


Am really very disappointed with the drastic drop in ;likes??? what is the issue guysAngry.. i believe the exams are over too ??? still y this CryCryCry??? ve seen so many of my ex readers no longer commenting on my threads, well ive never cribbed about this, but today felt like saying soCryCryCry… I hope ppl give me back honest reviews on this…
 
Secondly guys 
 
the story is almost ending.Cry.Dead . if u like to see some changes in the story do comment backLOL! Thanks for al ld love n support u have all given me through this FF 🙂 Hug
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#MaaneetKurbaanHua Anniversary this Tuesday    I want to know How many ppl from here who have Twitter accnts will make this memorable moment even more special ? Can we Flood TWITTER with #MaaneteKurbaanHua tags n pics ??? Am sure #Gurti will be defo happy to see this that we care and remember this priceless moments ! Chalo those who will help me Spam Twitter from today till #MaaneetKurbaanHua makes a mark on Tweetie Too comment back and show me your active participation ???? looking Forward for great response! !!

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PART 19 :

 

 

           It was 2 by the time Geet and Fred finally reached the backdoor of Peter’s house, they were astounded to see lights till on in the living roomOuch, they waited for an hour to let Peter rest and then would sneak into the house, but unfortunately the lights never dimed out , taking risks Geet n Fred slowly sneaked into the house, with the very little she knew about the house they both slit and took various floors to search Patricia’s room, first Fred went to the living room, to his surprise Peter was asleep but with Tv and lights on, his room was tampered and this gave Fred creepy feelings, he checked to see Peter’s breathing, it was  not laboured but smooth, he went down to other floor. Geet had heard noises in the backdrop and turned around and found lights from the farthest room on the floor, she went in to see Maan asleep on the master bed, the room was neat and untouched, she was shocked beyond wordsShockedShockedShocked, she paged Fred and he came over to that room.Ouch

 

 

                  Geet was speechless, and tears threatening to fall from her eyesCry, Fred composed her , they checked on Maan and he seemed asleep no abnormalities , they finally started searching for medicines and in few drawers search, there were some old medicines and left over bottles, Geet packed them all, with the emergency kit Fred carried, Fred immediately injected A drug into Maan’s vein, a drug that would reverse any sedative he had takenAngry. With the turn of incidents Fred had come to a conclusion that Maan n Peter had taken some strong dose of sedative. Hoping that with this drug Maan would get up before Peter and leave this place before being caught.Wink

 

 

              At 4 in the morning , she had her hands covered her face and sobbing non stop,. Of  all the findings she could have got this was not expected, being tried for Medical Negligence was traumatic Broken Heartbut being accused of Murder was something very differentAngry. Things had finally hsapped up, Maan had wontedly druged Patricia to death and to show up a s a responsible Dr had tried all means to save her inspite of injecting back poison in her bloodAngry. Fred couldn’t see her broken state he tried to control her and bring her to senses, but she was lost in thoughts, Fred had finally decided that Patricia’ needs justice and they will submit the Autopsy reports to the court.Angry

 

 

            The court Proceedings started Maan was just so lost seated there, his trip to Peter’s house had turned futile, he had mixed Peter’s drink so that the guy sleeps off while he could house search but to his astonishment it was the early sunrise that brought him to senses, he got confused as to whether he drank the spiked drinks, but he had been back home after he search availing nothing to his reach. He saw Geet n Fred enter the hallShocked,. With files and reports, his heart stopped beating , what if they had succeeded in autopsy, his heart shuddered, Geet came over and sat next to him Ouch. Fred went over and spoke to the Attorney and submitted those papers, the Judge looking at the sudden twist in the case gave an hour break to study the latest developments in the case and would announce the verdict by then, he signaled Dr.Fred to accompany for the Judges bench meet and discuss the autopsy stuffSleepy, Maan’s jaw dropped. Geet pulled him from there, as the court was adjourned for an hour, she hurried him downstairs and before being stopped by any security jumped into a Porsche and started to drive mercilesslyLOL, she had acted absurd the very instant, but all that she could do was kidnap him nad run away and prevent him from further mental trauma, what he could have done to Patricia’s would be wrong or rightAngry, but all that mattered to her right now was him, and his safety, after long drive she finally muttered the courage to speak as they boarded a train to their next destination, she spoke ” I know what happened with Patricia Dead“– he replied back “I too know that”Angry , she spoke “then why didn’t you tell me anythingAngry“, he was confused , ” Why did we run away from the court, I cant get that , if the autopsy reports had it all then we can prove my innocenceAngry” Geet stared back, this guy still had the audacity to tell he was innocent.Angry

 

PRECAP : is Maan still innocent ???WinkLAST PART!!!!! 

 

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THE BARRIER – MY VEIL – PART 5 –


Am really very disappointed with the drastic drop in ;likes??? what is the issue guysAngry.. i believe the exams are over too ??? still y this CryCryCry??? ve seen so many of my ex readers no longer commenting on my threads, well ive never cribbed about this, but today felt like saying soCryCryCry… I hope ppl give me back honest reviews on this…
 
Secondly guys my FF DARK HIDDEN SECRETS is getting over in couple of partsCryCryCry… If any of you have not read it kindly do so.. its just 20 parts ! am sure you will like it, its a suspense n thriller filled story where maaneet are drs and Maan charged on Medical negligence case! Do gimme your reviews!!!Cry
 
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#MaaneetKurbaanHua Anniversary this Tuesday    I want to know How many ppl from here who have Twitter accnts will make this memorable moment even more special ? Can we Flood TWITTER with #MaaneteKurbaanHua tags n pics ??? Am sure #Gurti will be defo happy to see this that we care and remember this priceless moments ! Chalo those who will help me Spam Twitter from today till #MaaneetKurbaanHua makes a mark on Tweetie Too comment back and show me your active participation ???? looking Forward for great response! !!

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PART 5 :

 

 

 

 

Maan gestured the kids to be seated, Geet’s jaws fell, she didn’t want to take class in front  of her so called sadoo principalAngry, she detested him and his weird behavioural  instincts. She tried to keep herself composed and then finally to her utter disappointment Maan walked inwards towards her , took off the Teacher’s copy of Notes and went behind to seat himself in a deserted cornerOuch. She clenched her teeth and then gave a staring smile and tried to concentrate, her class for the day was on algebra and the formulas accompanying it, she briefly started giving long derivations of the formulas when he stopped her , actually he was observing her class fir the past 10 minutes but she seemed to smoothly handle it and this was bothering himROFL, finding nothing to taunt her he had raised hands to which she gave a deathly stare , he spoke,

 

 

“Ms.Geet, your voice is not audible at this end of the class, if you are just trying to teach the blackboards am afraid the kids will not benefit anything from your class”Angry

 

                        She knew he was playing, she knew she was audible till the last row, she herself had checked on the students many times during the class, she got really angry and started fidgeting her purse, His mind went blank , Knowing the extent of her state of mind and her presentfull answers, he thought she will pull out some Battery Operated Microphone to talk Embarrassedor worse he knew her agitated state she will come and bark right through his ears knocking him out of his sensesLOL, but what happened minutes later , evoked the devil in him letting him bark on her and go outside the class, making her Roll with laughter, what she did was beyond his thinking, he kept cursing her as he walked back to his room,Ouch

 

 

                   Geet had taken out something form her purse and walked straight to where he was seated, she kept a hair pin on top of his table and said politely , Maan Sir, you need Ear WaxingLOL, get an appointment with your ENT specialist , but till then you can manage cleaning your ears with this pin and haan don’t mind returning back, I have lots of pins.Embarrassed

 

 

 

 

                   He felt like strangulating her at her audacity, but he was helpless, he just rose from his seat , thrusting it back to her hands, a look that would kill anyone, she trembled thinking as to how he would react and before she could say any more he had left the class, but once he reached the doorstep he turned back and saidAngry

 

 

“Learn to respect your Elders, Students, this is the very first lesson I always teach you, and due to some new comers mindless actions let you not forget certain principles of lifeConfused, they say a Good teacher’s words are etched in the students memories , I just want you to etch whatever Madam Geet teaches you on MathsEmbarrassed, but her other irresponsible behaviour if I see in nay of you, then you will get Transfer Certificate Angry– I don’t want any ill mannered , arrogant student in my schoolAngry, I hope am clear” After his monologue, Geet had almost tears in her eyes, of all his rude taunts this was worst, may be she deserved it she thought, after all taunting a Principal if front of the whole class was not manners, luckily for her the class had been over, and she hurried to the staff room, hwen Pinky, The Social Science teacher pulled her into Principal’s room . Her heart stopped beating , and as she entered she felt she couldn’t look up to meet his gazeCry, she had her held down, seeing her in such a sorry state he felt hurted, an invisible needle pricking through his body he wanted to see her smile, he wanted her to look up into his eyes and see the charm of his eyes, but in presence of all the staff he couldn’t say anything and continued the reason why he had called for the meeting.Angry

 

“Its such a pleasant news that I want to share with you all, this Saturday myself and Muskaan Handa are getting engaged, I know this was due for long time but my grandmom finally found the auspiciosus date, I and my family would be overwhelmed to solicit your presence on such an occasion to join us in our happiness “, unfortunately for him he never felt joy or pride as he spoke his so called happinessSleepy, her down trodden look made him so restless and uncomfortable through out the Invitation , he didn’t feel any joy run through him but pain and guilt ran his veins to see a chirpy soul stay numb. Probably he had spoken too much in front of his ego, probably she was not that much mannerless, probably where so many things, he felt his heart constrict.Broken Heart

 

PRECAP : The Engagement Embarrassed+ The Accident !!!Wink

 

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