THE BARRIER – MY VEIL – PROLOGUE / CS


Hi guys… I have a power failure tomorrow and dont think will be able to upload my Prologue but i didnt want to break my promise, so here am i giving u the update 12 hours before 5th April itself!!! Kal kare so aaj kar…Embarrassed
aaj kare so abhi…ROFL

THE BARRIER MY VEIL

 

 

PROLOGUE & CHARACTER SKETCH : 

 

She feels : My religion consists of a humble admiration of the illimitable superior spirit who reveals himself in the slight details we are able to perceive with our frail and feeble mind. She was an Orthodox on her religious values.

 

 

 

He feels: It is a fine thing to establish one’s own religion in one’s heart, not to be dependent on tradition and second-hand ideals. Life will seem to you, later, not a lesser, but a greater thing. He was an Atheist. 

 

 

 

 

She feels : One cannot sacrifice his or beliefs and religion
First of all I have to understand that my religion my values are supreme, 

all of us are advised to stick to our religions and go to Mosques and temples pray to to shower Happinesss and piece to all man kindss. 

 

 

 

He Feels : Religion has convinced people that there’s an invisible man … living in the sky. Who watches everything you do every minute of every day. And the invisible man has a list of ten specific things he doesn’t want you to do. And if you do any of these things, he will send you to a special place, of burning and fire and smoke and torture and anguish for you to live forever, and suffer, and suffer, and burn, and scream, until the end of time.

 

 

 

She Feels : Everyone ought to worship God according to his own inclinations, and not to be constrained by force.

 

 

 

 

He feels : “We have just enough religion to make us hate, but not enough to make us love one another.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

“Some say that my teaching is nonsense. Others call it lofty but impractical. But to those who have looked inside themselves, this nonsense makes perfect sense. And to those who put it into practice, this loftiness has roots that go deep.”

— Lao-Tzu, 

 

 

 

MAAN SINGH KHURANA : A 28 year old Principal, who loved students and derived pleasure in teaching , of the vast Empire of Khurana’s he chose to work as Principal, One who help his students in all respects. He makes his students able to live better life. He teaches students to take decisions in all the conditions. Excellence par himself.

 

 

 

GEET ALI KHAN : A 25 year old Masters in Maths, who immensely loved social service, was member of many organizations, born and brought up in a upper middle class Muslim family, very reserved and valued her traditions and customs.

 

 

 

Will spun more characters as the story revolves around! Dnt want to over load the character sketch!

 

 

 

                   It was a perfect morning at Delhi High School, she walked past like a snail, swift and brisk, her footsteps repelled the sand in a way that noise threatened to vogue. She streamed around and took a vacant seat, multiple pair of eyes were gazing at her direction but all that appeared for their retina were her hazel eyes.Cool

 

 

 

 

                   Ms Geet Ali Khan , the peon almost squeaked in his most monotonous voice, after a wait of an hour, which she spent reading the Holy verses which she knew by heart and glancing her FaceBook Messenger often, her heart leaped and she got up with the chirp of a butterfly, her walk like an elephant majestic and triumphatic, thoroughly the manners that only elite family would posses.Thumbs Up

 

 

 

 

                  She stormed into for the interview, as elegantly and composed one could imagine and sat infront of Him, the great MSK, he noticed she the first girl who didn’t shiver at his gaze, his lips curled at a mockful smile. She extended her file, he started at those Hazel Eyes, he spoke

 

“What is the color of the chair you are seated”Question

 

She retorted back

 

“Same as the one you are seated on”Stern Smile

 

 

OH! That attitude bowled him and more than that the Nightingale voice made him lose ,

 

“So Ms.Geet Ali Khan Where have your honours from”

 

“Sir, I am a graduate from DU”

 

“Why is it you’d taken Mathematics”

 

“Because I love to solve problems! I have a magnetic attraction towards them”LOL

 

“why do you think you will work here?”Wink

 

“Because you seemed to have already decided” she leant back on her chair, he stared, she chuckled and spoke again,

 

“Cos, you didn’t ask why I want to work here, but instead said will ‘ future tenseROFL! Your assertive pronoun Sir!”

 

 

OMG! His slip of Grammar , and she caught him offguard, was there anyone who could overtake him, well there wasn’t a single soul he met in the last 28 years of his existence, but today was a different date. Yes indeed it was.Clap

 

 

PRECAP : More of Character Sketches and family Background! Nd yes Muskaan Handa coming up! Stay tuned.Wink

 

 

Will give d family circle in Part 1 and after tat story will begin !

 

 

plus add urself into this group, to get all linksss…LOL

 

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16 thoughts on “THE BARRIER – MY VEIL – PROLOGUE / CS

  1. OMG . . .
    I didn’t know i m the 1st one to comment
    Well the 1st Question maan ask was good
    Wese geet ne b intelligent answer diya
    Agar kisi ne mujhe se ye question pochha hota tu i would have look down on the chair i m sitting and than would have answered. . .loll

    • Yes dear.. u r d First!!!!

      First Qn LOL!!!!

      yes she answered smartly!

      Yes tat is what everyone does either turn back to see d color or look down to see ! 😛

  2. Interesting…looking forward to read more….i liked geet’s character sketch..i must tell u this is the first time i m reading this kind of story based as teachers in school n different religion otherwise i have read many of the ffs by other people..awesome..:)

    • Thankss Riya… U liked d CS me happy shappy!!

      am feeling glad u r reading this concept first time hopefully my concept is unique..

      thaks for ur comment, hop eu find it interstin in future too 🙂

  3. Greattt start Mali.. you just excelled in that interview section..;) keep up da gud work.. I must say the concept of this FF is just superb.. 🙂 I’m really eager 2 know the consequences which would force Maaneet to get married..

    • LOL!!! Mali bowing down in gratitude !!!

      LOL!!! me jumpinh high,… u loved d concept hayeeee!!!!

      Yes the consequences r gonna b worth reading 😛 Believe me!

  4. Awesome prologue jaaanaaa… The start is fantastic, u can see Maan and Geet are North/South poles and you know they will attract and repel against each other as much like magnets…. And all these based on religion itself is awesome… Yet to read a story which explores the religious differences maaneet might face… So this is a first!! 😀 It will be interesting to see maan accusing religion aa human excuse and geet as a muslim, rebutting him and trying to sing praises of Allah and also put the faith back into Maan’s system…. And omg hahahaha u made the mighty khurana a PRINCIPAL!!! 😉 😛 And awww maaneet pehla nok jhok in this story… Hw adorable are these two… ❤ Esp my geeeeet ❤ ^_^ I just love hw she twisted his words…. MSK to gaya!! 😀 Now off to read chapter one!! ^_^ Now happy baby?? 😉

    • awww!!!1 Jaanaa..i so much missed u here!!!!

      u loved d start 😛 yes they r poles apart!!! religion itself is a deep rooted issue jaana hope i dnt hurt emotions to either side followers… am tensed every time i write some coments which can lead to some issues… i too havent read any story on maaneet with religion as a factor. .so thought of this concept! yes u kinda right!!! maan n geet r gonna keep accusing each other later!! yes mighty khurana a principa!!! yes they r adorable evrywhere u see them!!! MSK tho gaya LOL!!! yeasss am happy!!! wanna see u everywhere!

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